福州雅思托福培訓(xùn)：寫作常見錯(cuò)誤示范!雅思寫作考試難點(diǎn)有很多，思路和語法是其中常見的兩項(xiàng)。前者的攻克似乎需要日積月累的堅(jiān)持，而后者的達(dá)成卻有一些有效的方法。其中的一個(gè)，就是參照別人的錯(cuò)誤，避免發(fā)生類似錯(cuò)誤。本文遴選了雅思作文中比較容易犯的錯(cuò)誤，希望各位烤鴨與自己的文章進(jìn)行對(duì)照，有則改之無則加勉。
福州雅思托福培訓(xùn)：寫作常見錯(cuò)誤示范
常見錯(cuò)誤一：句式雜糅 (run-on sentence)
- 概念解釋：
a run-on is a sentence in which two or more independent clauses (i.e., complete sentences) are joined without appropriate punctuation or conjunction.
- 錯(cuò)誤范例：
there are many students go abroad.
- 錯(cuò)誤原因分析：
大量考生忽視了中英文寫作表達(dá)的區(qū)別，常常按照中文句子的分割方式，從意義出發(fā)，只要意思沒表達(dá)完，便可以一句連一句地寫下去，直至內(nèi)容結(jié)束，即出現(xiàn)“一逗到底”的斷句方式;而英文句子是按照結(jié)構(gòu)分割的，只要句子含有完整的主謂結(jié)構(gòu)，就可以獨(dú)立成句。那么，上述例子中的錯(cuò)誤就是將兩個(gè)單句”there are many students.”和”many students go abroad.”想當(dāng)然地混合在了一起。
福州雅思托福培訓(xùn)：寫作常見錯(cuò)誤示范
常見錯(cuò)誤二：句子連接
- 錯(cuò)誤范例：
1. modern communication technology is progressing at a rapid pace, the volume and extent of cultural transmissions in the contemporary period have far exceeded those of earlier eras.
2. modern communication technology is progressing at a rapid pace, therefore the volume and extent of cultural transmissions in the contemporary period have far exceeded those of earlier eras.
- 錯(cuò)誤原因分析：
1、逗號(hào)不能連接具有完整主謂賓的句子;
2、有大量同學(xué)認(rèn)為此時(shí)加上一個(gè)表因果的詞”therefore”就可以連接兩個(gè)句子了，但therefore是副詞，同樣不能連接兩個(gè)完整的句子
- 改正后：
1. modern communication technology is progressing at a rapid pace, so the volume and extent of cultural transmissions in the contemporary period have far exceeded those of earlier eras.
2. modern communication technology is progressing at a rapid pace; therefore, the volume and extent of cultural transmissions in the contemporary period have far exceeded those of earlier eras.
- 改正后：
方法一：去掉根據(jù)中文直譯而多余的”there be”，直接恢復(fù)成一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句
many students go abroad.
句子簡(jiǎn)單明了，符合英文習(xí)慣。
方法二：將其中一個(gè)句子保留作為主體句，同時(shí)將另外一個(gè)句子變成主體句的從屬成分或是從句
there are many students going abroad.
there are many students who go abroad.
滿足了部分考生對(duì)使用非謂語動(dòng)詞或復(fù)雜句的需求。
常見錯(cuò)誤三：不一致
- 概念解釋：
包括主謂不一致、數(shù)的不一致、時(shí)態(tài)不一致、代詞不一致、比較對(duì)象不一致等
- 錯(cuò)誤范例：
1. the average life span in the 1980’s was much longer than 1880’s.
2. a series of debates between the two lecturers were scheduled for the next weekend.
- 錯(cuò)誤原因分析：
1、比較對(duì)象不一致，在使用形容詞和副詞比較級(jí)時(shí)，我們往往容易受漢語的影響，忽略了比較對(duì)象應(yīng)該一致的問題。
2、主謂不一致，本句主語是series
- 改正后：
1. the average life span in the 1980’s was much longer than that in the 1880’s.
2. a series of debates between the two lecturers was scheduled for the next weekend.
常見錯(cuò)誤四：名詞單復(fù)數(shù)
- 錯(cuò)誤范例：
we need several evidences to demonstrate the validity of this argument.
- 錯(cuò)誤原因分析：
通常evidence用作不可數(shù)名詞。若“一條證據(jù)”，用a piece of evidence;若“很多證據(jù)”，可以用”plentiful”, ”ample”, “abundant”, “a mass of”, “a body of”等
- 改正后：
we need several evidence to demonstrate the validity of this argument.
福州雅思托福培訓(xùn)：寫作常見錯(cuò)誤示范
常見錯(cuò)誤五：冠詞誤用
- 錯(cuò)誤范例：
1. the disagreement promotes further exploration.
2. disagreement of these two economists’ opinions on the prediction encouraged them to delve into more thorough research.
- 錯(cuò)誤原因分析：
1、“分歧促進(jìn)深入探索”，此時(shí)的disagreement應(yīng)該為泛指，不需要the;2、“這兩位經(jīng)濟(jì)學(xué)家關(guān)于預(yù)測(cè)結(jié)果的意見的分歧激勵(lì)他們進(jìn)行更的研究”，這里的”disagreement”應(yīng)該是特指這兩個(gè)人的意見的分歧，所以需要”the”。
- 改正后：
1. disagreement promotes further exploration.
2. the disagreement of these two economists’ opinions on the prediction encouraged them to delve into more thorough research.
福州雅思托福培訓(xùn)：寫作常見錯(cuò)誤示范
常見錯(cuò)誤六：從句誤用
- 錯(cuò)誤范例：
1. this is apparently the most reasonable solution which can change the situation.
2. the author claims this new air traffic control system will work well and it allows more planes to be in the air more safely and able to fly more direct routes.
3. no matter who has the courage to challenge the authority is likely to succeed.
- 錯(cuò)誤原因分析：
1、定語從句修飾的先行詞solution被形容成the most resonable修飾，所以定語從句應(yīng)該用that引導(dǎo)而非which;
2、正規(guī)書面語中，賓語從句的that一般不省略，此句中claim后面引導(dǎo)兩個(gè)賓語從句，考生經(jīng)常忽略第二個(gè)賓語從句的引導(dǎo)詞that;
3、no matter who只能引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句，而whoever既可以引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句也可以引導(dǎo)名詞性從句。
- 改正后：
1. this is apparently the most reasonable solution that can change the situation.
2. the author claims that this new air traffic control system will work well and that it allows more planes to be in the air more safely and able to fly more direct routes.
3. whoever has the courage to challenge the authority is likely to succeed.
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